Final Images
Feedback
Evaluation
I had wanted my images to be fairly simple to look at which is why I was selective with detail and kept a lot of the background blank, however, in light of my feedback I can now see why my landscape and portrait images appear quite empty in comparison to the background on my square image. This dashed mark making is quite intense because I wanted to show the the daunting experience of a fight and I didn't feel the other two images needed this harsh element. I think in future I need to experiment with working on different coloured and textured papers to fill a space more. I am glad people commented on craftsmanship and attention to detail as I wanted these final images to look neat and clean. Although this wasn't commented on, I feel I should have stretched my paper first so it didn't crease as this would make the presentation more professional. I could have also scanned the images in to Photoshop to edit them slightly and print them out in a high quality.
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